LO4: Revised Script

(Written by Sam, Keenen, Salik)

(Written by Sam)

(Written by Keenen)

(Written by Keenen)

(Written by Salik)

(Written by Sam)

(Written by Sam)

(Written by Keenen)

(Written by Salik)

(Written by Salik)

(Written by Sam)

(Written by Keenen)

(Written by Salik)

(Written by Sam)

(Written by Keenen)

We made sure that we changed the spacing of each paragraph in order for the script to look more professional in comparrison to how it use to be. We changed the space in order to make sure the correct scene didn't drif onto the wrong pages, so we could keep the script together. We also included a response for Cal so say within the script.

  Within this part of the script we added dialogue from what Cal might say as a starter about his YouTube. We've also made sure that parts of the script that are in pervious scenes are spearated from different scenes.

An over the shoulder shot was added to this part of the script to transition to the next scne of the script. We also removed part of the first paragraph from the script up until it says 'YouTube Channel'.

We removed the action of a handsake from out of this scene in the script  and placed it onto the next page due to the fact that we wanted to make the composition of the script look professioanl which it wouldn't if this action stayed crammed onto this part of the script.

We added a detailed reponse for Cal's friends based on the question we've asked them within the scene of the script. We also moved some more text in order to make the script look neat again.

We used the margin within word to make sure that all the text lined up with the rest of the text properly within this page.

We merged these two separate pages of the script into one page. We also used the margin within work yet again to line the charatcers up correctly with each other.