After gaining feedback for our draft we have learned that from our client what we must do in order to improve our script, so we have tried to incorporate this feedback to our new script.
(Written by Salik)
We decided to share out the writing of the script pages between the group, but we were all together giving our input towards making the script by supporting each other.
Here is the final script that my group have produced for the documentary, we've removed all of Cal's answers where he replies with 'His answer' this is done to create a continues dialogue within the script in order for him to incorporate his own personal answer to the mix.
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